What have you learned from your audience feedback?
Our docuementary is aimed at teenagers and young adults that are of a C1 social class and below. Before we uploaded our final cut we put up a first cut of what we had so far. By doing this it allowed us to get a mix of different responses both good and bad.
From our first cut we received a lot of feedback both positive and constructive. We reveived a lot of positive feedback which allowed us to develope some ideas that we already had included due to the good response from our audience, for example the talking heads part with out protagonist (Courtney) is telling us about her story and we have her mother talk about her experience aswell, we were told that this was a strong idea and it gave us the idea to work on that more and also include a friend talking about her story and how it has effected other people other than Courtney.
However we did receive a fair amount of constructive feedback to help further improve our documentary, for example our sound levels were really bad and in some parts it was hard to hear the dialogue in some parts because the music which was supposed to be in the background were too high, so we decided to change that and lower the level of the music in the background so that it can still be heard but also the dialogue is still very clear over the top of the music. Furthermore some of the music that we used didnt work well and we received feedback on this from our teacher who gave us ideas about what music we should include so that we are still adressing our target audience and keeping them interested.
Moreover, for our first cut our documentary was far too short and only just reached over three minutes, this was a very big issue that we had to sort out straight away, however it did become a slight struggle as we did keep running out of ideas that we could use that would work well and wouldn't take us away from the forms and conventions of other media products. We adressed this issue by asking our class (after showing them our first cut) what they thought and if there was anything that they would like to have included, or anything they thought would work well. We did use some of the ideas that were given to us, however after receiving the feedback it helped us to come up with out own ideas after listening to how we could elaborate on ideas that we have already included.